Cristiano Ronaldo

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I'm the ball boy in the loud and big crowd I can see the soccer players. My favorite is Cristiano Ronaldo I look up to him and he's my role model I wish I could be like him. I grip the blue and red ball tightly and as Cristiano Ronaldo passes it to another team member to score. He knocked me over while running but it was on accident because he was running to fast we hit heads really hard. I fell on the rock hard ground it was as cold as ice. I felt sick and dizzy when I got back on my feet.

Then the usual I go back to my warm small house after a long day and sleep. Next sunny morning I wake up and I can’t believe what I see. I look through the mirror and I see Cristiano Ronaldo. I look through sparkly clear glass, and see a clear blue pool. I was confused did my parents by this?. I walk into another room and this lady throws me some gold car key.

I get changed and walk to the shiny black and red car, for some reason I know exactly where to go for soccer training and exactly how to drive. So I drove off all the way to my training place, all of Cristiano Ronaldo friends were there and expected me to do really well with my training.  

But they were mistaken because I am really bad at soccer. But I kept trying and trying and trying and eventually I got better. Cristiano Ronaldo’s friends kept laughing at me because it looked like I haven't even played before.

Then I go back to my shiney cool car and went back to my huge mansion. At 5.00am in the morning I go to training early so I can get ready for the tournament this afternoon. No ones there except for me, lucky the coach gave me keys for the equipment room so I can get the balls and cones. Then Cristiano Ronaldo friends turn up a while later and saw me training. They joined in and we all trained together. After a long time training, it was finally time for the tournament.

We went in a new white warm van because there weren't that many of us. Hours after that, we arrived. I was so excited, nervous and at the same time because I was excited to play and nervous to play in front of heaps of people and finally because I don’t want to lose. Not long after we were lining up to run out on the field. But then I look behind me and I see my real body I give Cristiano Ronaldo the evils, and he looks back with a cringe on his face. We ran out onto the green soft grass of the field. Then the game begins!. I stand around watching my team get goals every time we start with the ball. When the other team starts with the ball we try our best and get the ball, sometimes it just goes back and forth, back and forth. Suddenly one of my teammates kick on the right side of the field, me and Cristiano Ronaldo ran fast we were as fast as cheetahs. Finally we got to the small colourful ball, we tried to slide kick the ball but we did it at the same time.

We hit heads again really hard. Then I feel different I feel shorter, I look at myself and feel so happy I'm in my real body. We play on and we ended up on a tie. Then we go back home after a long huge crazy day and sleep.

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